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arrow-up1319arrow-down1image[Sea Mask] by thelittleworldoflizi.imgur.comTehBamski@lemmy.world to Comic Strips@lemmy.worldEnglish · 7 hours agomessage-square6fedilink
minus-squareMagnyusG@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up5arrow-down1·6 hours agoit would’ve been a little funnier if the had dolphin said, “It’s a mask” after being proven wrong
minus-squarePunnyName@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up9arrow-down1·6 hours agoShow, don’t tell. The comic works as is.
minus-squareMagnyusG@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up3·5 hours agoBoth work, I just feel that admittance would have been more amusing than just being stupefied.
minus-squareMajorMajormajormajor@lemmy.calinkfedilinkarrow-up2·2 hours agoI feel it would have been better for the dolphin to say “those are shorts.” after the shark put them on. Better punchline that way.
it would’ve been a little funnier if the had dolphin said, “It’s a mask” after being proven wrong
Show, don’t tell. The comic works as is.
Both work, I just feel that admittance would have been more amusing than just being stupefied.
I feel it would have been better for the dolphin to say “those are shorts.” after the shark put them on. Better punchline that way.
THAT would have been fucking funny!